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qatarperegrine) wrote2008-10-28 08:53 pm
qatarperegrine) wrote2008-10-28 08:53 pm
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The danger of misplaced modifiers
CNN's front page currently has a sentence that makes me cry inside:
"Though previously Democratic, McCain's supporters see Pennsylvania as a potential swing state with just six days to go."
McCain's supporters are previously Democratic???
And, Pennsylvania is a state with just six days to go? What will it be after then??
I am secretly posting this, not because I think you're interested, but so I have access to this sentence next time I try to convince a student that misplaced modifiers are a bad idea.
"Though previously Democratic, McCain's supporters see Pennsylvania as a potential swing state with just six days to go."
McCain's supporters are previously Democratic???
And, Pennsylvania is a state with just six days to go? What will it be after then??
I am secretly posting this, not because I think you're interested, but so I have access to this sentence next time I try to convince a student that misplaced modifiers are a bad idea.
Re: as it was before, so it shall be again